The Mother's Day present is bought, the cake is collected. Now I have to actually give her it tomorrow. I hope she likes it but we'll see.
Today was really long and dragged because no one was in. I saw the end of 'Sucker Punch' and I couldn't help but feel it was a bit disturbing to be honest. I don't know if I really want to see it. Surprisingly they made it a 12A so that's caused controversy with parents. Great!
I was discussing how long 'Songbirds' was getting especially as I was reaching 100k and to be honest there's still quite a bit that needs to be done.
emerald_skies suggested that I should split it into two. It's a radical idea, but it has merit. I would be able to go deeper into the whole relationship with Pierre and Bettina, Tom's crisis and Rob's romance with Flora in more detail. I feel part of the problem is that I need to sort out the end of the novel. It's getting there but it's just finishing the draft before tearing it apart and making it the best it can be. I really would like to publish this one. There's just something about the characters and their story that I really want to do justice.
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Today was really long and dragged because no one was in. I saw the end of 'Sucker Punch' and I couldn't help but feel it was a bit disturbing to be honest. I don't know if I really want to see it. Surprisingly they made it a 12A so that's caused controversy with parents. Great!
I was discussing how long 'Songbirds' was getting especially as I was reaching 100k and to be honest there's still quite a bit that needs to be done.
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